tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post5190975641175967194..comments2024-03-24T18:43:18.706-04:00Comments on Darwinfish 2: The Bow-Chicka-Wow-Wow Storybluzdudehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-80047679897094508552013-10-30T22:23:26.547-04:002013-10-30T22:23:26.547-04:00Hot storyHot storyDrumBeatDaughternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-19448513257461655272011-04-04T18:23:01.632-04:002011-04-04T18:23:01.632-04:00Cristy,
FYI, I wrote an alternate version of this ...<b>Cristy,</b><br />FYI, I wrote an alternate version of this story (that also includes some elements of the next post) that is more explicit (although without getting hardcore), to be used as a guest post. I’ll have an alert posted when it hits the internet. <br /><br />Yeah, if there was no payoff with the Diane story, it wouldn’t have been much of a story. Hell, I’ve been rejected lots of times… why would I write about it, other than just to torment myself.<br /><br />And yes, “side-boobage” is a very effective barometer of where the night is leading, while maintaining plausible deniability.bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-90514621802724222482011-04-04T15:54:32.009-04:002011-04-04T15:54:32.009-04:00Awesome. Glad there was some action involved ther...Awesome. Glad there was some action involved there. I would've felt really bad if you had all this lead-up and nothing happened w/"Diane."<br /><br />Side-boobage is totally a legit starter. Nice.<br /><br />My own writing (for the book, not the blog) includes some pretty explicit stuff, too. Hey - write what you'd like to read, right? :) Great job!Cristyhttp://tomncristy.livejournal.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-5936083484171342122011-03-16T18:09:33.456-04:002011-03-16T18:09:33.456-04:00Master? Naaaah. Just a putz that got lucky once....Master? Naaaah. Just a putz that got lucky once. I just happened to be the one left standing when the music stopped.bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-48747686110008297952011-03-16T17:37:42.897-04:002011-03-16T17:37:42.897-04:00Bluz! You dog, you! Truly, I bow to the master.Bluz! You dog, you! Truly, I bow to the master.Mrs. Bachelor Girlhttp://www.bachelorgirl.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-610098800069819542011-03-15T18:12:49.547-04:002011-03-15T18:12:49.547-04:00Jessica,
That’s totally how I intended it to be re...<b>Jessica,</b><br />That’s totally how I intended it to be read. I found it’s a delicate balance. It’s one thing for a girl to talk about her sexual adventures… it’s bold and cool. But when a guy does it, it seems like bragging and that’s not how I meant it at all. It was just a story I thought was worthy of being told, and thought I could do something with it. Of course it’s always fun when the boy gets the girl.bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-15152364405497959092011-03-15T05:42:29.454-04:002011-03-15T05:42:29.454-04:00"Like crazed weasels." Awesome.
Is it ..."Like crazed weasels." Awesome. <br /><br />Is it bad that I was reading this like a romance novel?Jessica Rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08570728792334267155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-8244135502761058172011-03-14T18:00:53.441-04:002011-03-14T18:00:53.441-04:00DG,
I never intended to be “explicit,” I was just ...<b>DG,</b><br />I never intended to be “explicit,” I was just trying to avoid having my family standing around staring the fine points of my old sex life. Not that it helped any… It was like trying to scare ants away from a picnic by scattering sugar.<br /><br />I do intend to write a “Director’s Cut” version of this (and the next) story, to do as a guest post for another blog friend. I’ll keep you pervs in the loop.bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-11643044459804953522011-03-14T14:42:55.046-04:002011-03-14T14:42:55.046-04:00Given the disclaimer, I was expecting some more T ...Given the disclaimer, I was expecting some more T & A than that.DGnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-33298943710629163662011-03-13T21:35:56.926-04:002011-03-13T21:35:56.926-04:00Burgh Baby,
I have no idea how to take that. TMI?...Burgh Baby,<br />I have no idea how to take that. TMI? Then you're going to hate the next post...bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-2833703330294296852011-03-13T21:07:59.237-04:002011-03-13T21:07:59.237-04:00Oh, my.Oh, my.Burgh Babyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09123901504643963583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-33454442487082228962011-03-13T10:35:18.773-04:002011-03-13T10:35:18.773-04:00Welcome, Trooper, and thank you.
The story will co...Welcome, Trooper, and thank you.<br />The story will continue in the next post, which I'll have up later tonight.bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-52140761808012975272011-03-13T07:01:58.525-04:002011-03-13T07:01:58.525-04:00Nicely done. Let's hear more.Nicely done. Let's hear more.Trooper Thornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09914276373305636583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-19609738043505496672011-03-12T15:56:32.783-05:002011-03-12T15:56:32.783-05:00Judie,
Eh, I just fell into that one. If I was a ...Judie,<br />Eh, I just fell into that one. If I was a real "Dude!" I'd have made something happen when we were still in school, rather than when there was no one else around to choose from.bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-10703259284073521132011-03-12T15:06:52.027-05:002011-03-12T15:06:52.027-05:00Bluz!! You total DUDE! I can hardly wait for the ...Bluz!! You total DUDE! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!!Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-32321774635088848622011-03-12T15:05:00.950-05:002011-03-12T15:05:00.950-05:00Mundane,
All I was saying is that when you're ...Mundane,<br />All I was saying is that when you're in your 20's, you're not thinking, "She's taking me to a piano recital! I'm going to get some while I'm there!<br /><br />The sideboob functioned as a nice appetizer, to break the ice, while maintaining deniability.<br /><br />"Sorry, I didn't mean to get you there..."bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-25146935719258562332011-03-12T14:40:50.297-05:002011-03-12T14:40:50.297-05:00It was cool, dude. As I recall, it was mostly the...It was cool, dude. As I recall, it was mostly the Girlfriend that kicked up all the shit about that.<br /><br />I'll get to our "toast" in the next post.bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-23483107605325602482011-03-12T14:40:32.067-05:002011-03-12T14:40:32.067-05:00Hey, what's NOT sexy about a piano recital?
S...Hey, what's NOT sexy about a piano recital?<br /><br />Some good sideboob action gets 'em every time. Nice work!Unapologetically Mundanehttp://www.unapologeticallymundane.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-55800346623434252852011-03-12T14:34:09.025-05:002011-03-12T14:34:09.025-05:00We talked long and HARD (me hard her long)about no...We talked long and HARD (me hard her long)about not having Brill pissed so I actually told him about stayin the night and would never step on his toes but he said to "go for it" ... Just to be sure I don't come off like a total Ass ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-29087779499395568222011-03-12T14:10:32.485-05:002011-03-12T14:10:32.485-05:00So much for keeping "family" away from t...So much for keeping "family" away from this post...bluzdudehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05991272670722362652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-329507352453931374.post-11133029887837482722011-03-12T12:03:31.686-05:002011-03-12T12:03:31.686-05:00Once Brill's Mom said, very sheepishly confide...Once Brill's Mom said, very sheepishly confidential, "I think Mark has a...girl friend." She was very protective and concerned.<br />I thought, but didn't say, "Girl, yeah. Friend, dunno. She may actually kill him."<br />Fortunately, you are more robust than Brill and "Grubby" tolerant.Mary Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07436313849372588111noreply@blogger.com